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WindWalker
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0 posted 2007-06-03 11:12 AM


Ads depict the military
as a great profession to get into:
full of perks, bonuses and perhaps
a diploma or two for later...
Ah, the good life beckons.
Or does it?

How can having a license to kill
be called a noble profession?
why give soldiers medals
and call them heroes
after killing innocent people
in some foreign land?
After blasting the earth
and destroying the environment?

Heroes, indeed! Who did they kill for?
The multinational corporation’s profits;
for money, for numbers... for nothing
and when they return home
will they find that life here
has substantially improved?
Heroes?  No.
At best: fools; at worst: murderers.

© Copyright 2007 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
gmcooper
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since 2007-05-30
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1 posted 2007-06-03 11:21 AM


This is a difficult subject, debate bait, as they would say (and this isn't the forum for that)  so I will only comment on the freedom we have to post our expressions and how that freedom came about is self-explainatory. You've expressed yours well.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-06-03 05:45 PM


The Military serves a purpose...
sometimes right and sometimes wrong...
Consider this...without the Nations possessing a Military; after France and Poland and Russia and Great Britian, among many others, Hitler would have conquered the United States...haven't mentioned Japan attacking Pearl Harbor yet...facing these events without a Military is perhaps desirable to you, but not desirable for me...suggest you read Winston Churchill's six volumes about "The Second World War."... James

Huan Yi
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3 posted 2007-06-03 06:27 PM


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Our God and soldier we alike adore
Ev'n at the brink of danger; not before:
after deliverance, both alike requited
Our God's forgotten, and our soldiers slighted.

Francis Quarles (1632)

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Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-06-04 02:13 AM


oh, are we allowed to talk about the war in such a transparent thinking?

good poem.

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5 posted 2007-06-04 08:47 AM


The next time you see one of those same murderers, be sure to give them your thanks. It was people exactly like them who insured your right to say exactly what you just did.

On its merits, though... I thought you did an excellent job writing this.

What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?.
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Balladeer
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6 posted 2007-06-04 06:07 PM


The fact that you wrote this in English and not German makes me thank a soldier so much more
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