»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #40
»
jean sock acadia
| Open Poetry #40 |
|
jean sock acadia |
|
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
|
you were across the room that evening across town too in thought wearing the eyes of man like friendly jewelry that fit your valley like a sundown between heavy breast mountains wiggle foot is always lovely shoe hang on toe maybes and something to do with music that makes if all fit like a welcome spoon in luke warm jello before it has a cold night we had history I guess like england and montana a lot had happened in different places and we could see the footprints but didn't know the path only that a lot of walking and some running put us there inside another opportunity for nothing special or a perhaps nudge that made occasional crows at the edges of your eyes where they had been before when you whispered with eagles _________________ daark |
||
| © Copyright 2007 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
mysteriously life, serves up her own platter, no matter what we think and feel...and when we learn to go with the flow, it always turns out all right, doesn't it, but the memories, ohhh baby the memories are so good! Dark, this was I believe, one of your best, or at least, my favorite of all of yours... this especailly touched my heart. Thank you... |
||
|
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I can do nothing but smile at how very lovely this is D...yep....sweet  |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is truly good to see you writing again. We've missed your musings. |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms leej, you are always a treat with your woman thought reply, thanks babe!! _______________________ Donna bless you lady friend for the touch. Thank you ________________________ ms sun, as always your tender professionalism is a pleasent greeting...thanks ms |
||
MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
have missed your gracious words  My spirit will rise |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms groves, thank you lady |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
shoe hang on toe maybes and something to do with music that makes if all fit ... and when England and Montana flit, landing in some sunrise of pleased, tea may always be served after some appropriate wahoos... |
||
|
aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
D I love how you weave words. A |
||
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
stranger darlin' your words still do that thing they always did so good to read them again |
||
|
ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Like a moment from my life, WOW, awesome stuff again. |
||
|
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
just wonderful Mr Daark... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you each for your eyes on my humble words |
||
|
gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
This is a fantastic read. |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks GM |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
