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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-05-24 02:39 PM

A tear
Size of heaven
Dropped torrentially
Swatting, swirling, oscillating,
Wash the formless soul of  the shapeless being
For thousand years, have we got cleaned?
Open  my heart with wet eyes
A colored kiss
A tear

Thought when reading Marge's book

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

1 posted 2007-05-24 05:24 PM

Drauntz,
Dear friend, this is absolutely beautiful. I know what you mean about Marge's book. It moves my soul to tears also. Such beauty, such trials, such human spirit ... all rolled up in one place. How could you not be moved?

And that is how I feel about this poem of yours, too? How could you not be moved?

~Love Ya
~Terry

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-05-24 05:37 PM

TerryW

thank you so much. Yes, you are very right. But my tear is silent, tear on the trail screams.
thank you again.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2007-05-24 06:31 PM

Bao Dearest Bao~
Just knowing that my 'Out of the Whispering Winds' would have moved you so, is one more blessing to me~

Thank you, my friend ... thank you~

And TerryW~
You are beautiful too~

I am so blessed with the knowing of wonderful friends like you both~

*HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~
~*Willow White Feather*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-05-24 07:30 PM

Dear Marge, love you, love your poem, love you kind heart and your spirit of life. always an inspire.

many hugs.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-05-24 07:38 PM

Nice...James

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

6 posted 2007-05-24 08:22 PM

if that book inspired this poem, then it has to be amazing.

JaySea
Junior Member

since 2006-11-17

Posts 23
Salina, KS - USA

7 posted 2007-05-24 08:57 PM

Thank you for sharing this enjoyable work.

JaySea

You are your own greatest resource.... use all that can be revealed through YOU. JaySea

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