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A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2007-05-22 12:27 PM

The Letter To You

Hello,
I'm writing this to you
As all the words are in the air;
There's been no chance to prove them true,
And in the wave of my despair
I've nothing else to do.

The breath of wind will dry my tears,
The wind of change... but love's eternal,
And with those tears it won't fade,
I'll die - the flame of love will burn
And dwell here till the end of days.

And every time I see your eyes
In my own world behind my lashes,
The stars in our evening sky
Seem bleak... and from tomorrow's ashes
My hope revives.

My love, you never broke my heart,
As it was simply never whole.
You've just picked up its every shard;
Without knowing, you have stolen
Them all... It's fate, it's not your fault.

And, as you keep it in your hands,
It's drenched in all of your misfortunes.
To see your pain I just can't stand,
Each of your tears is a torture...
So give it all to me.
We will withstand.

Please, talk to me, please, let me hear
Your voice, and tell me what to do
To let you know I'm always here,
To ease the pain you're going through.

With love,
I won't sign my letter.
I am the one... you know who.
The day... It doesn't even matter -
It's one more day without you.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2007-05-22 12:32 PM

I felt this as I read it.

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

2 posted 2007-05-22 03:15 PM

Wow! So much emotion in this.

It ached..

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-05-22 05:27 PM

Silky...James

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-05-22 07:58 PM

a cry from your heart. A true love letter. whoever read it would wish to be the receiver.
so full of emotions.

beautiful and beautiful again.

thank you for sharing.

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

5 posted 2007-05-22 11:20 PM

Definitely words from the heart. I've been there.

Nice write,
Kristabell

"You are today where your thoughts have brought you; you will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you." James Lane Allen

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

6 posted 2007-06-04 11:34 AM

This was so moving, loved it.

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