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Red Butterfly
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Red Butterfly |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Soft wings kissing my eyes And the red color wind Enticing my sight I slipped into deep sleep and I dreamed I dreamed into your dream I saw that it was me who had flown Out of mirror, hairs were still wet Over forest, my hair, the jungles Holding many lives Crossing rives, my tears rain goodbyes That echoes to the end of the sky I dropped out of your dream I died A single wave I am back While vanished the red butterfly I pick up his scattered shadows That tremble and silently cry “A broken heart, Pumps not hot blood Bleeding chambers into flats Still flapping for a sigh” Forever my red butterfly. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
A bitter sweet saranade. Nice write, Kristabell "You are today where your thoughts have brought you; you will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you." James Lane Allen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bao~ One could easily get addicted to the creative winging of your thoughts ... and 'this' someone has~  Lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful writing...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And I heard you say somewhere, that you are not a poet!!! If this is not deeply poetical, what is? Beautiful!! Love, Margherita  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What vivid paint! Softly mesmerizing. TD |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Lovely! just beautiful! |
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