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LeeJ
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0 posted 2007-05-23 07:37 AM


it was an
orange
dusk evening
quiet moon
shows herself
in sombrous mood
like great fire
from a volcano
her
homesick mind
longing
for
another
night...

always...
             just...
                        one more...

chanting
          a habitual monolith

a
mighty sea-wall
                 of light

infinate optimism
                   in her face
extraordinary knowledge

...after all...

she reins earth's
nights

coinciding

with effects

of other

manifesations

faint glows
little sighing sounds
of moon dawn
full radiance
shining upon
oceans and sea

an inner terrace
of love staring
intently
at all the people
of the earth
veins of shimmering
white fire

languor passing
through fascinated
lovers....

as moonlight thickens
eyes pulse with joy

radiance
seems to await me?

I'm lost in
the sight of some
portal
of
fixation
drowzyness
filled with ectasy
it is indeed
intimacy
unimaginable
crystalling
music
swells
my
inner being

shimmering
tentacles
luminescent
spirals
tell
an inward
vision

we have a core

a nucleaus

whirling beyond

anything imaginable

we are tiny
globelets
of color
shirling
a gleam
of moonray

bursting
into life
power
leaping
the highest
of high

echoing
vast distances
yet so small
so small

sandering
precisely
through intensification
until an element
of phenomena
caresses memory
birthing vision
above all horizon

silver wavelets
of phosphorescence
pulsing
incandescence

playing
upon the surface of
my tiny little world
drifting me
with embrace
passing luminescence
from the
far depths of life's
body....
living opalescence
filling my consciousness
with great eager yearning
...longing
yet huge fulfillment
bittersweet
no less

had this been a hallucination?


the space where I stand
every moment caressed me
with sheer awe

realizing just how profound
how utterly & wickedly
beautiful
these whispers of light
cleanse the soul
let me know
that all is well with the world
for tonight

can you picture in your mind
fingers of moonlight
streatching out upon the earth?

can you feel it's beauty
it's over powering origin
understading great
love
beyond
boarders
beyond
the great
beyond?

Outstanding
vigulance

Oh embrace me
life
make love to me
I'm yours

(one summer evening, standing on the ocean front deck of a motel room in Long Beach Island, NJ)

I've been told, I'm very deep
as if it were a bad thing...
maybe so?
and yet

how I love to get lost
within those thoughts,
those questions...
that part of life
we forget exists...
we forget to explore
understanding ourselves

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (05-23-2007 11:15 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2007-05-23 08:15 AM


LeeJ
You describe your world very well. Enjoyed.

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2007-05-23 04:22 PM


Just like...peyote! ?

something one could never dream?

it's all discovery!

You should bottle this stuff, Lee, it's GREAT!

Magnus
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3 posted 2007-05-23 04:32 PM


Love and all that goes with it, surrounds
it and gives it to us is so grand~!!!~

Sunshine
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4 posted 2007-05-23 06:04 PM


realizing just how profound
how utterly & wickedly
beautiful
these whispers of light
cleanse the soul
let me know
that all is well with the world
for tonight

~*~

You make the moments count, dear one!


passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2007-05-23 07:10 PM


I do love it when you get lost

always amazing

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-05-23 07:22 PM


Enjoyed reading this...James
JL
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Texas, USA
7 posted 2007-05-23 11:02 PM


"can you picture in your mind
fingers of moonlight
streatching out upon the earth?"

YUP!  I sure can.
You make it so easy...
Sweet write Lee J.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

8 posted 2007-05-24 06:39 AM


oh boy...
I was actually afraid to post this...afraid you guys might think I was weird...

and then, I just didn't care...cuz when this feeling floods over me...I could honestly cry tears of joy, for the experience of it...and wanted to share, but, mere words cannot explain the graduer of it...at least not mine?

Many thanks to you all, for your patience, kindness and loving eyes  

for reading and understanding...I know you've all been there...without peyote....hehe  

Much love to you all &
Happy Holiday Weekend

Me

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