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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-05-21 11:06 PM

Slice Of Melon

When June scribes the flavor of man in fruit
Juices flow of ripe cantaloupe and mango ice
Reminding me of chiffon floating backless in the breeze
When we laughed until tears took over the rack of ribs
Hand in hand meandering a slice of moonlight
That made me hungry for the glisten on his lips

Pine has a scent of realism more hypnotic than wine
The trunks give audience without intrusive eyes
Moss is soft underfoot, un-disturbing in remark
Excited breaths massage from deep down emotions
Making way to fingertip journey on half lit slope
Hearing love made in echoes of resuscitative glee

Carried here in the simple sounds of night
Summer glimmers such pure and sweet highlight
A slice of almost always joy worth anticipation
That I should keep a picnic packed in goose bump ready
For this adventure was begun a dream to be
On evening winds that tip the slice of melon happily

Copyright Kkh 5/21/07

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-05-22 02:24 PM

This is a soooo very beautiful poem I wonder why people missed it.

How sweet to write like this?! I call this a real poem.

I wanted a man out of water melon. better seedless so there is nothing annoying when I consume him. am I right?

It is a truly beautiful and very romantic poem.

happily enjoyed.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2007-05-22 07:09 PM

OK Kiddo....do you have a recipe for all of
this?

Great job, now where's duh beef?

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2007-05-22 07:47 PM

a pleasant ‘slice’ of summer thoughts evoking fine memories…

I REALLY like:

“Pine has a scent of realism more hypnotic than wine
The trunks give audience without intrusive eyes..’

enjoyed!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2007-05-22 10:10 PM

this makes me hungry!

lovely poem!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2007-05-23 11:19 AM

tremendous
enjoyed this

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2007-05-23 11:17 PM

"For this adventure was begun a dream to be
On evening winds that tip the slice of melon happily"

Very nice!!
I so enjoy your poetry!
I even read it thrice!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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