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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-05-19 06:41 PM


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In autumn mountains
Above the monkeys’ cries
A flute— being played


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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2007-05-19 07:05 PM


i see it

or maybe
i hear it

Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-05-20 10:48 AM


By summer streams
Under the cicadas' singing
Two strings-- being played


which word can replace the word of play? if there is a better one? I try to search one.

Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-05-20 07:50 PM


???? I have my bad dream again because of the monkey image.
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