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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Coyote-Moon Red dust dancing ‘til tired wind dies cacti lament sunset’s passing orange to purple Twilight... coyote-moon rising in night-desert song lonesome stars watching far beyond man! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
very beautiful poem of loneliness and sadness. part of life. enjoyed. Truly nice one. I read some of your poems in other forum. They are all wonderful. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I can picture a giant seguaro cactus with its 'arms' bent downward instead of upward. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bruce~ I like the idea of 'red dust dancing'~ Greatly enjoyed this little 'outside the lines' penning of yours~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
An Ansel Adams landscape with color. I can smell the pinion burning. Fine imaging! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That last line as the tie to the bind, poet. Well done! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you have obviously visited the desert poet at least in your mind picture perfect! and so poignant... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You made me feel like the "little Prince", it's all there, the desert, the stars and the moon. Wonderfully involving. Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You accomplished a great deal with an economy of words!!! Excellent! I could picture the scenes vividly in my mind's eye! Coyote-Moon hugs, Linda |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Awesome word choice. You are right. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
HOWLING HERE |
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