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The Commitment
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The Commitment |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: The Commitment She the tongue and I the shell Where two souls embraced the spell Brought about a ghost of new And echoes in eternity flew As a cry escaped the bell Nirvana touches every shore Resonating forever more The common swell those wings for thee Circle round and sing for me Ridding air that wraps the store Shaking loose the common wield Raging o’er the common field Bending in forever’s wend Looking for a journeys end Falling to the common yield Of holy vows and oaths assail I bare my back against the flail Baptized in a common core Hand in hand forever more The sound forever rings in sail It wails in swell, that tongue struck shell While tolling o’er the endless spell |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I love reading your poems early in the morning and late at night -- they just wash over me in their beauty. A |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I love reading your poems to....as I'm certain, everyone else does...there is always rhyme and reason...deliberated within a smooth soft voice of wisdom. Thank you Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
aziza A real sweet comment, thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You are being real kind today.  |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
a very romatic one, a helpless romantic poem. beautiful enjoyed as always have a wonderful evening, Sir Tabin! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz Thank you so much for the read and kind comment. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah Sir Sy... I'm sighing here  beautifully expressed... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RDB, Thank you kindly. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"She the tongue and I the shell" that one line alone is a poem Sir Sy enjoyed |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
They are all correct. This is a great poem. Your words always strike up a lovely tune. |
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