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Another Day |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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the sun shines in the west window the kitchen faucet drips to the east I see the crossroads I feel my heart as it slips I can't help but to think it's time for me to go tired of this lonely house and the way I've come to know sun at my back clock tick-tocking stare fades into dusk feet feel like walking not really tied down, but stuck another day goes by- but thinking of you helps me on till I can finally say goodbye. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I consider this quite excellent (and powerful) 'Realism'... and, boy can I relate to the thoughts and feelings contained in this fine 'write'! MUCH applause!! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Pssing, this is a very good one. I love this. Felt the sadness also felt the hope.. enjoyed wish you have a good day and night. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
So touching dixie friend and I felt every word Hope |
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