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stckmnbrtndr
New Member

since 2007-05-16

Posts 2
Nevada

0 posted 2007-05-16 12:21 PM

I took you in my life
like i had no harm in the past
i forgot all the pain
and lived life with a blast.

I've run myself ragged
cooking, cleaning, paying bills
I make your breakfast lunch and dinner
while you play and have thrills.

My heart is suffering
my mind is gone
wondering if you will stay
or leave for long.

You said you loved me
I believed it was true
you dream of her at night
im wondering if i should fight.

What did i do? What should i have done?
If i did it all right,
and you were satisfied
why did you seek to take flight?

Im trying to understand
I'm trying to forgive
but the thought is there
will you reach for her hand.

She sent you photos
of course they were sexy
you said that liked them
and also i love you sweety.

If this is what you want
If this is what you need
Don't make me a fool
Please just leave.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-05-16 12:35 PM

felt your pain. give him a chance.

enjoyed the poem of anger.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2007-05-16 08:02 AM

Welcome to Pip! This was a poignant first post.
My POV? this is a partner to abandon, asap.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2007-05-16 10:00 AM

Welcome to Passions, where heartbreak
and loving comfort can both be found.

Please, check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2007-05-16 11:51 AM

Hello and welcome to PIP. I hope you
enjoy your time here.

I also hope this is not written from experience.
It sounds very hurtful.
Hugs,
Ethel aka garysgirl

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-05-16 06:45 PM

Enjoyed...some want the fun and not the responsibility...
How can you make an irresponsible person to be responsible...
You can't...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2007-05-16 10:15 PM

welcome to PIP...I know I read this earlier...felt it deeply

stckmnbrtndr
New Member

since 2007-05-16

Posts 2
Nevada

7 posted 2007-05-17 01:27 AM

Thank you all very much, my boyfriend and I are going to try and work it out. It felt great to vent tho. Thank you all again, I am working on more to post.

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