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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-05-15 06:00 PM



Excuse Me


I'll have some
of those fast cars
to drive and some
soft women to touch.
Sometimes I'm like a
kid in a candy store,
desirous of fun
and giving
into the
sweet taste
of lust.


JamesLee
13May
2007



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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-15 06:56 PM


another romantic poem. quite manly.

enjoyed as always

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2007-05-15 06:58 PM


No need to excuse yourself for liking the finer things in life. I loved the flow of this piece and the content brought a smile to my face
Ruth

I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2007-05-16 02:04 AM


Ya know, the more I read - the more I like your style.

A

passing shadows
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