Open Poetry #40 |
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Fountain Pen |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan ![]() |
. I had forgotten Ink had a smell Once indigo On light blue In equally pale blue Envelopes Letters From across the seas Nothing written Even now Overwhelms The first impressions Of those hues Distant worlds Beyond the Dismal neighborhood Whose lambent words That little boy Couldn’t read . |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Excellent ['slice of life'] write! [most pleasant 'read'!] MUCH applause! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
kind of puzzled. why? a beautiful poem as always. thank you! May you have a very good night, sir Pawlik. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What an excellent title. You certainly did this one justice! Much enjoyed your fountain pen. TD |
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