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Open Poetry #40

Help me please

Ada'Do'Lis'Do'Ti
Junior Member

since 2006-07-04

Posts 24
germany

0 posted 2007-05-15 04:03 AM

Help me please,

I'm trying to find something
forgot what it was
I cant remeber this thing

I think that I had it a while ago
Where it is now
I feel i ought to know

I held it close warm and tender
I know I held it dear
What it looks like I cant remember

wonder can anyone see
I can feel the hole
I know it was close to me

But where to find it I cant say
Only that I miss it
Now that its gone away

If you could please help me
I miss it so
I dont know whats missing
Only that is made me whole.

Everyday I see a sunrise is a blessing, Every night I see the moon rise is a miracle.

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

1 posted 2007-05-15 10:03 AM

Amazing, I really enjoyed this one, it was so intense and powerful and you could feel the pain that comes out from it.

Well done.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-05-15 06:14 PM

It must be a thief who stole your "forget-me-not" heart. Poor "I".

enjoyed and helped.

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