My Dearest Friend - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-03-17 12:15 PM

If I say you were a mountain,
rooting deeply in the vast plain,
You must have feet of unshakable
on the principle of the capable
holding in your mysterious brain.

under the Sun and the rain,
you stand tall,
in the snow and wind,
you laugh them all.

Autumn Jet will not make you cold
Winter white will not make you old,

Rainbow of spring will not make you proud.
Thunder of summer will not make you loud.

Morning mist shade you not,
Neither clouds have you caught

Through every moonless night,
With pride you stand quite,
The beauty of your profile,
Powerfully in sight,
Is on the cosmic light.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-03-17 06:30 AM

now I like this one!! Awesome!

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

2 posted 2007-03-17 08:22 AM

"Autumn Jet will not make you cold
Winter white will not make you old,

Rainbow of spring will not make you proud.
Thunder of summer will not make you loud."

I like how you weave the seasons into this descriptive piece.

Enjoyed.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2007-03-17 12:35 PM

Mentors are amazing people, able to share,
and inspired. Yours has given much to you.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2007-03-17 01:49 PM

Awesome write.
Enjoyed the read very much.
TD

Benji Glaab
Junior Member

since 2006-08-28

Posts 12
Ontario/B.C Canada

5 posted 2007-03-17 03:04 PM

Good stuff, I'll read your work in the future.

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

6 posted 2007-03-17 03:52 PM

awesome!!! perfectly awesome!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

7 posted 2007-05-14 04:01 AM

Your words have such strength here, very much enjoyed.

Rick

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2007-05-14 08:10 AM

SweetBaoFriend~
So creative are your thoughts ....
you shine a bright light on this damp Florida day~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

MegMeg
Member

since 2007-05-14

Posts 85
Virginia

9 posted 2007-05-15 05:38 PM

Interesting.... It's very lovely.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2007-05-15 06:06 PM

Wonderful...James

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.