Open Poetry #40 |
In the Night |
MegMeg Member
since 2007-05-14
Posts 85Virginia |
Living high in the moon-lit sky, they often sit and watch the passerby. Lovers and thieves come out at night, oh for them what an interesting sight, Secret lovers under darkness meet, while somewhere else a child is beat. Bloodied and tired and oh so worn, A mother dies when her baby is born. Old and crippled and out in the street, another man dies with nothing to eat. Out in his car a shooter does wait, Consumed by his anger, fury, and hate. A little boy gets kidnapped tonight, resisting his aggressor with all his might. In her bed an old lady will die, saying 'I love you.' with her last sigh. Cold, hungry, and turned down with ease, a man with two daughters in the gutter will freeze. Those majestic figures so kind and bright, those beautiful stars, angels of the night. When they see this, what do they say? nothing. Just pray for a better day. ~Meg~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Just pray for a better day. Amen... JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Touching and, oh so true ... Welcome to PiP. Wonderful poem. Alison |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome to PIP great first post! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Chillingly surreal, yet all too real. So much happens, beneath those 'twinkling' stars. Welcome to Pips. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pray for a better day, indeed. Welcome to Passions, Meg. Please, check your Email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this so reminded me of sitting on a park bench in New York City, watching everyone, and you certainly do see a lot... Hugs and thank you for this you've drawn a picture, and I could read the snapshots in my mind..... well done and welcome |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Meg. This is a very touching poem and so real. Thanks for letting us see a glimpse of your heart. And, welcome to PIP! Hugs, Ethel aka garysgirl |
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