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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite, repost: Futility Cornucopias horn is full Yet I see the pain of hunger There are more than three bags full Who is the hoarder, which monger? Most of the written pages Time has eaten and burped away Through the banquet of the ages Bilious with gay and bray Apocalypse pours the glass for few Pledging them desired power Always mesmerizing those new With the idyllic of the hour Is this the seed of chaos core? The rivers flow of inane The exit of the gardens door Our humanities insane But who am I to rap times rend I cannot even dream an end |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ BUT .. you can write poetry that is spell-binding ! That puts you at the top in my book !!! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
While I don't always write a reply for all of your poetry that I read -- I do seek it out. I enjoy your style and this poem is excellent. Thank you. Alison |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Well you are on the top of my friendship list.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alison, You have my humble thanks. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I am left hoping we never see an end to your writing...Such a joy to read words that paint beautiful visions even if this one is sad...Well done...*Big Hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Thank you for the big hugs. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
My dear Sir, chaos is back. Must be the hurricane season. enjoyed as always have a wonderful day, Sir Tabin. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz Must be, thank you for the read and comment. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Is this the seed of chaos core? The rivers flow of inane The exit of the gardens door Our humanities insane But who am I to rap times rend I cannot even dream an end" Excellent write Seymour Tabin. Enjoy reading you. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JL Thank you so much for the lovely comment. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Greetings, Mr. T. A lovely offering from your horn of plenty.  Giving you a warm, evening hug, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel A warm hug indeed, thank you dear. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So much to ponder is packed into these lines... this is superb writing, my friend! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
wow! "Cornucopias horn is full Yet I see the pain of hunger" this one made me think good one |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Sigh... what a good write... but sad that the world... our world... is like this... |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
As a Capricornian born I thank Amalthea for her horn. Though nurturing God Zeus too, alas left nought for me and you. Though even Cronus swallowed stones when fed to save God Zeus's bones, so horn of plenty has a price and one that isn't always nice. When Apocalypse has had its say there's few it may help on their way, so lust not for it's secret power accept that you it won't devour. Within the seed of chaos core we'll exit through our garden's door and take with us a poet's heart as on our journey we depart. But I am me, and me's my friend and new beginnings are my end... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You are among one of the best. |
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