Open Poetry #40 |
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The Forgotten Night |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Hi to all my pip friends. it's been a while since i last posted, and i've missed you all. i hope i can start posting often again. here we go, The Forgotten Night I'm walking alone trough this cold night through this cold streets the moon is not where it should be she refused to shine tonight the stars aren't there either they have refused to shine too and the people said today that the sun didn't rise and they think it won't be rising for a while the forgotten night full of mystery the forgotten night even the time forgot to pass by i decided to take a walk a long long lonely walk just to search for the moon and the stars and tell them to shine again and if i were to find the time along my walk i'll tell him to keep passing by for me, this forgotten night is important on a night like this same date years ago you decided to leave taking my moon away my stars and even the time along with my heart and left me walking on an endless forgotten night. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denis~ Nice to see you found your way back to our little poetic circle~ Melancholy little render ... tender~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome back! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
wow, this is a beautiful and romantic and a pure heart--poem. enjoyed at night. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
No one wants to lose someone they want to love and care for...James |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Great comeback!!! |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Wow!!! This was amazing. I could feel every word. Much applause! |
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