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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-05-30 07:02 AM

Morning skies awaken
in amber hues
where God cradles
the quiet of calm

in his palms.

It is then,
when thoughts drift   in wish
of finding lost moments

                 where fingertips touched the dawn

with hands clasped
dreams were shared

        {I can't erase the memories held there}

Night arrived too quickly
along with the
ditheistic nature
slowly burning,

turning you into
that sometimes stranger

unknown, yet known.

Blackness entwined
with rays of light
     and I tried

to keep you
from slipping

     to rise above

but darkness
overpowered

  the power
     of my love

now only reflections
linger at the edge
of what once was

where my heart lies

      ever still

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (05-30-2007 08:52 AM).]

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-05-30 11:12 AM

fine, powerful, emotive 'write'!

I especially liked:

" Night arrived too quickly
along with the
ditheistic nature
slowly burning,

turning you into
that sometimes stranger

unknown, yet known.

Blackness entwined
with rays of light
     and I tried

to keep you
from slipping

     to rise above

but darkness
overpowered

  the power
     of my love"

long sustained applause!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-05-30 12:34 PM

like looking in that mirror again

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2007-05-30 04:46 PM

You are indeed a Gentle Spirit.
A beautiful write.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-05-30 07:21 PM

beautiful and simply beautiful.truly

very touching

enjoyed

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
Member

since 2001-06-02

Posts 190

5 posted 2007-05-30 07:46 PM

Wonderfully powerful read

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2007-05-31 01:00 PM

beautiful~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

gmcooper
Junior Member

since 2007-05-30

Posts 47

7 posted 2007-06-02 09:38 PM

This is a poem that takes the reader beyond his/her boundaries.

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

8 posted 2007-06-03 01:55 PM

wow... simply beautiful!!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2007-06-03 10:06 PM

touching
yes indeed gentle Donna

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2007-06-04 12:30 PM

How beautiful this is!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2007-06-04 06:17 AM

Thank you all so much for stopping in and leaving your kind words behind. You are so appreciated. Hugs to all.

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