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Open Poetry #40
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The_Nameless_One
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0 posted 2007-05-15 12:42 PM


The bone crunches hard
Twisting tendons scream slowly
Hot blood pouring out
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Saluting with misty eyes
1 posted 2007-05-15 08:33 PM

I see this as just another animal attack; however, I think we should probably keep an eye on this poet. I get a feeling that there is going to bee some pushing of the lines in the future.

What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?.
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ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2007-05-15 09:00 PM

A compound fracture of the soul.
Well done.
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