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Open Poetry #40

Breaking the Ice

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2007-05-13 01:41 PM

                 to put it blunt

i'm not complaining that i bear the brunt

of my inability to punt her field goals

my intincts were telling me that the stunt

               of stealing her gold

              was a little too risky

          but her heart's so "Beautiful"

the thought of us dancing to a James Blunt melody

made sipping her whisky

                      worth it

                                                         love,

                                                         howard

[This message has been edited by howardtsu (05-13-2007 04:33 PM).]

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-05-13 05:45 PM

I shall feel the pain of you because after so many letters, you are still not ablt to take her to dance.

enjoyed

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-05-14 04:26 PM

Nice writing...James

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