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Mr. Omniscient
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0 posted 2007-05-13 09:47 PM



I look at you and what do I see?
Cheeks inflated as if stung by a bumblebee,
You have blissful hands,
Sensitive hands,
Hands that cut through darkness and pull me into the light,
A beautiful girl like you,
You have to be Ms. Right.

Rocks and clusters of metal wrapped around every crack and line can only form a smile ever so divine.
We’re rich girl, we have millions,
With those two flawless sapphires that grow under your eyelids and that treasure chest that contains those thirty-two pearls,
What’s funny is the key to that chest, is merely a simple joke.
Because that simple joke provokes a smile,
And that beautiful smile takes me up to heaven for a while.

Beauty doesn’t define you,,
You’re not part of beauty’s nature,
You are beauty’s nature, and it is beauty you define.

[This message has been edited by Mr. Omniscient (05-14-2007 09:40 PM).]

© Copyright 2007 Alexander Higginbottom - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2007-05-14 12:11 PM


Quite a tribute.
Heart write.
Well done.

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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2 posted 2007-05-14 12:41 PM


beautiful and beautiful again. A very romantic poem to read at night.

enjoyed.

Mr. Omniscient
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since 2006-10-28
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3 posted 2007-05-14 04:20 PM


Thank you very much, love input.
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