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Hope |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
When all is lost and everything seems impossible to repair. It can be hard to look to the future with a positive state of mind, as we all know life works in mysterious ways and can sometimes make little sense. Life in itself can bring you crashing to the ground making you dissolve into a million little pieces, fragmented and damaged. It can leave you shivering in the cold, powerful breeze that it left behind. At times like these all we can do is pray, sit and wait for a better day to arrive, keep dreaming and pushing on and remembering that all we have is hope. Hope which is like a shooting star you may not always see it you may not always believe it's there but once it comes into your vision it will settle right into the center of your heart giving you the strength to battle through life once more. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
still a love poem. How interesting to read your three poems to feel the different feelings. enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Jenna, very much enjoyed and holds many of my own thoughts within, thank you for sharing this my friend. Rick |
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thacuteone_09 New Member
since 2007-05-09
Posts 7 |
This poem is great. I actually feel like my world is crashing down quite often. It's good to see that someone still has hope alive and is giving the advice for others to do the same. This poem, Hope, is very touching. Thank you. |
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