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Open Poetry #40
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aziza
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0 posted 2007-05-13 01:42 AM

Gold lame’ folds tease rounded curves
Sparkling dancing dress flirts as it waits for dark
Kohl lids heavily lined in midnight blue
Lips succulent in suggestion covered in
Cherry Red Raspberry Frost
The lips of early evening
Streaks of red smearing, garish accentuation
Silver sprinkles dot perfumed breezes

Are you going out dancing?


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Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-05-13 01:54 AM

Good poem. very good.

I do not go out dancing. when young or old.

very beautiful ending.

you write good poems.
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