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Violet Time |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Violet Time take my hand come with me and I will show you a secret it is on the porch in the swing do you like pomegranate lime tea drink and the violet time will entice you these moments slip between day and night when crickets tune up practicing for concert and the air gets slowly eyelid heavy let us discuss cattails and road dust bathing in the smell of bursting buds above us a rust iron lullaby scrapes here the world dims in gloaming delight “but I'm so hard to handle |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful love poem again. enjoyed. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love pomegranate tea...makng ne wish for a warm evening swing on the porch.  M |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
smilin' just smilin' wish you could see . . . |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your words bring a daydream to life...swinging on a porch swing will the sky fills with stars...so beautiful...thank you for the vision...*Big Hugs* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
such a gentle graceful way with words Helen the crux for me lies here... "drink and the violet time will entice you" |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Simply lovely Alison |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I love this line and the air gets slowly eyelid heavy |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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