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Open Poetry #40

Declaration of I

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-05-13 12:35 PM

I
Am
Not
What
You’re
Thinking
I might be
I
Am
More
I
Am
Filled
With the
Bruises and
Cuts of one hurt
ButyouknowthatIdon’tupandquit
I
Can
Write of
Flowers and
Fairies dancing
In moonbeams of
Light rays in the sky
I
Can
Lift my
Voice in
High soprano
To sail into the sea
ButyouknowthatIamtonedeaf
I
Can
Talk fast
And cut corners
Go too fast in the rain
Splash in deep mud puddles
Fly on the wings of water drops
ButyouknowthatIwillremaingrounded
I
Am
Simply me

...

Alison

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-05-13 12:45 PM

THis is a very pretty poem for eyes to look at and for eyes to read and for ears to hear.

A poem of sorrow. no matter what, I am very glad that you have not lost "I". YOu are still a very strong "I". beauty of sorrow and power and self-confidence.

enjoyed very much

Thank you, dear lady!

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2007-05-13 12:48 PM

Drauntz

Thank you so much
for taking the time to read
and comment

A

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