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Open Poetry #40

Bring on the Buzz!

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-05-12 02:18 AM

Chitter-chatting morning magpie

entices

4-shots or 5?

While I pretend
to consider
And she pretends
ignorance

until

I almost beg for
shots of muddied brown
weakened by streams of white

Aroma seduces my impatience
Steaming primal need
Froth meets trembling lips
Addiction disguised
under plain paper wrapping

Again, gnawing need
is satiated

Alison

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-05-12 02:28 AM

magpie is a symbol of good news. Obviously you have had enough for tonight.(only if it is night in your place).

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-05-12 08:42 PM

I like it!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2007-05-13 12:40 PM

been reading back over your work Alison
right back to first piece you posted

your work is changing

yes?

I love this

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

4 posted 2007-05-13 01:05 AM

Thank you all for the comments and encouragement.

Yes, Lady, I think it is changing -- maybe growing -- stretching a bit perhaps?

You went back from the beginning -- you must have needed some shots to get through some of it, yes?

Thank you, sweet one - I think you are a reason that I am stretching a bit.

Alison

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