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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I have this fat-- my stomach wings a pooch above my womaning wishing for the loving cup of your hand of wandering and belly kisses like the bells of a woman's dancing- (ling!) in tiny bells strung just beneath the laughter of my button-belle grinning like a buddha-lass and dancing twice as fast-- I laugh! I am a woman with the fat of all that does encompass-ass giggling your tickling and laughing like a baby that you blew that splat of farts on me... I am a woman loving that: cradling your head. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yup, even though life is the way it is...we still continue to love, laugh and see the humor in all things.... ahhhh, I see the pen has taken on some characteristics...hehehehe hugs you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
aw Lee...it's really nice, when someone not only doesn't mind you getting old, but cheers every day you live again. That is really nice.  *hand over heart* thank you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Rub-a-dub-dub a child in a tub, be it a washtub or a bathtub.   |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
dear SB, you are one of the few that have been stormed down with wisdom and humor. I love to read your writing. The spirit and love and self-confidence are always an inspire. no matter what, there is always true SB standing there. Just by standing there, one will feel being comforted. Many hugs and many hugs again wish you have a wonderful day!!! [This message has been edited by Drauntz (05-11-2007 12:55 AM).] |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You know, I fell in love with this poem. Yep, I am in love. A |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Have you been peeking into my memories again, Ser?! You make me giggle and I lurve you!!!! *hugs*....jo |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
LOL....good job ya silly beyatch......some call that "booty-do"...when the belly sticks out more than your booty do......well written piece gal... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 belly laughing here!It somehow reminded me of Chaucer: "anon flee a ferte" which I intentionally rewrote as:"a nun flee a ferte" on a college test, and was severely chastised by a devoutly religious professor. THANKS for the giggle today, lady Serenity, it was greatly appreciated! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I found myself belly-laughing and saying out loud in true Crockodile Dundee form, "You call THAT a belly?!? ~ Now, THIS is a belly!" ~ as I point to my own! lol Enjoyed this bit o' self-deprecating humour!  Winking with my "button bell", Linda  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I know there was a time of playful squirm no belly firm or lips buzzing a laugh and to be ok still there that child gone to gray is that |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I happen to absolutely love my idea of what this poem was about - and it was about a puppy in your lap Yes it was! Either way you want to take this, it was sure creative lady. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you all for your insightful replies--I kinda like to have some fun here in the forum now and then. Heh.  Love to all, with my eternal gratitude. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 cool write |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"a pooch above my womaning" I love this poem find if quite lavish |
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