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Open Poetry #40
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The_Nameless_One
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since 2007-01-20
Posts 165
Missouri
0 posted 2007-05-11 09:32 PM

Flowing through the ocean of my mind
drifting through memories behind

Seeing from a different view
all the things that I will do

Not knowing what is to come
Nervous to the point of numb
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2007-05-11 09:43 PM

Let the deepest breath calm the nervousness of what is unknown.
I liked this.
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-05-11 10:20 PM

"calm down and wait."

a beautiful piece.

enjoyed the poem of wondering.

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