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Thinking Positive Sweet Thoughts
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Thinking Positive Sweet Thoughts |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Thinking Positive Sweet Thoughts My thoughts are filled with honey Spread on my silver laden dreams Such beauty and peacefulness I breathe Exhaling cinnamon and candy red roses Layering these chocolate cake memories Into a golden monument of faith and love A precious wife for a humble man Whose tears run as ivory icing on a dying heart Because he can no longer endure the sweet pain Of knowing his lover finds favor in another…….. Marcel |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
it is another book. beautiful poem. sweet. enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marcel~ Ooooh ... the icing dripped into a surprising end~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Keith...gosh, this one aches in its ending good to read you again |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hug |
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