Open Poetry #40 |
Just thinking.... |
MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
Just thinking of the time you left me in the dark Lost you forever... was my thought My fate accepted with a deathly calm Just thinking Of the emptiness I felt A void in the wind from your silence Reaching out to find no one Just thinking colors all faded laughter all gone Sadness no tears left to cry Just thinking how life without you would have been I would be lost Had you not come back to me Jen--->MindBodySoul [This message has been edited by MindBodySoul (05-11-2007 04:48 PM).] |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Fine, powerful, emotive 'write'! [as I have come to expect from this author!] much applause!! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
sad, sad, sad thinking. a beautiful poem of sadness wish you have a wonderful weekend, Jen. |
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