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MindBodySoul
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 196
NJ

0 posted 2007-05-11 02:59 PM



    

Just thinking
of the time you
left me in the dark
Lost you forever...
was my thought
My fate accepted
with a deathly calm

Just thinking
Of the emptiness I felt
A void in the wind
from your silence
Reaching out
to find no one

Just thinking
colors all faded
laughter all gone
Sadness
no tears left to cry

Just thinking
how life without you
would have been
I would be lost
Had you not come back to me


Jen--->MindBodySoul

[This message has been edited by MindBodySoul (05-11-2007 04:48 PM).]

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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
1 posted 2007-05-11 08:12 PM


Fine, powerful, emotive 'write'!

[as I have come to expect
  from this author!]

much applause!!


Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-05-11 10:10 PM


sad, sad, sad thinking.

a beautiful poem of sadness

wish you have a wonderful weekend, Jen.

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