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Open Poetry #40

[in a paper boat]

shirtless
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since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

0 posted 2007-05-11 01:03 PM

in a paper boat
on a shoreless sea

my hand,
cancer,
and the wind

moving
on the dance floor
of your skin

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2007-05-13 10:50 PM

This needs to go back to the top. The title alone is beautiful and the poem is just poignant. Thank you.

Alison

Midnitesun

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Gaia

2 posted 2007-05-16 07:37 AM

in agreement with Alison, this should be read again

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2007-05-17 09:21 AM

I'm bumping this to the top too. You've said more in these few words than some poets can say in pages

Ruth

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

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Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2007-05-19 06:40 AM

Anthony.... what a fine poet you are - beautifully expressed! thank you for the read RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

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In an upside-down garden

5 posted 2007-05-20 11:56 PM

I like.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2007-05-21 09:12 AM

Several layers of thoughtful
ponderance in this...

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