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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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I thought I was with you all the way... then.... how does one describe barber's adagio for strings? turning inside out two versions owing separate effects not surprising how a rivulet gradually becomes one with a large watercourse~ emotional meaning? you bet! beginning quietly gradually building then... overwhelming climax back down to a break speed quiet end then musical sequence that said only strings can play an empire is it you? a masterpiece he looked like you message in a bottle self composer neo-romantic harmonies way too complex extremely dissornant experimental only a summer romance you said tell me again write me again and again and again singing in a full throated way those strings... no wonder you can't breath? articulated rose arbor picinic basket and you classical summer of 99 concertos, piano, violin sounding like a faraway lute baying of green Ireland oxygen electrontic trance love is an ocean remix . . . . . . . . took me years to . . . be able to... say I despise you |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Wow, LeeJ, hitting hard you are today but exceptionally well. I suppose those words after all the years must bring a sense of freedom and freedom is meant to be enjoyed. Your "freedom of expression" is certainly enjoyed by me. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
emotional and powerful.and the confidence. enjoyed. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You make music, art, poetry. You words are the gold in a marvelous sunset. But your uppercut is a knockout punch… Great write Lee J. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You amaze me. A |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i love your poetry you do know that don't you? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
darn Lee... that ending...just about knocked me off my chair  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting title and ‘write’! [quite an ending!] I especially liked: “...overwhelming climax back down to a break speed quiet end…”; “…neo-romantic harmonies way too complex…” “…sounding like a faraway lute baying of green Ireland…” one question: “dissornant” ?? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I see what you meant by your reply to my poem! It appears we were both having lunar moments! Your denouement came out of left field and packed a powerful punch of poetic justice! Loved it! ~ and you! Linda |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Great expression in this piece. Much enjoyed, Kristabell "You are today where your thoughts have brought you; you will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you." James Lane Allen |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are all the better for the sensual... and then common sense... but still, you remember a maestro and the tune still knows your heartstrings. Well done, gal! |
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