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Open Poetry #40

Spring

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2007-05-10 08:58 PM

I needed this
Spring
I need the surge
you give me
when you look into my eyes
and kiss my nose
I needed the feeling
I got when we first slow danced
while cleaning your room
When we hold each other
I don't care if I feel cliche
because it's true
I never wanted anyone like this
I'm crazy for you
And when I find myself thinking
about you
I catch my breath
intuition overload
I knew this would be
the first time
I caught a glimpse of you
peeking into my dreams
I felt you
carried over the moon's frequency
Connections fade in and out
with the static of
meant to be's
and short live destiny's
But you
and I
don't need to use words
Because you know
that I know
that I love you too

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-05-11 01:50 AM

this is a beautiful love poem. truly lovely.
You know what you are talking about....The feeling of love and being loved.
"Because you know
that I know
that I love you too" love...need not much words. you are very right.

enjoyed springly. I wish I can have some spring's coolness.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2007-05-11 09:13 AM

Aha! Spring is in the air ~ as well as love!

I couldn't help but smile all the way through your sweet protestations of love! Being in love looks good on you, Kristen! I'm so happy for you!

May your summer be as sweet as your spring!

Loving hug,
Linda

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2007-05-11 09:16 AM

I knew this would be
the first time
I caught a glimpse of you
peeking into my dreams
I felt you
carried over the moon's frequency

beautiful...so in love with spring....

wonderful magical write

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