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Drauntz
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0 posted 2007-05-08 04:16 PM



Nowhere

You show me that star
You point with your light.
Climb alone it
Is all you’ve said
To reach that height
I make strong fight

What if the light is off?
Then how do I get back?


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2007-05-08 04:37 PM


neat write
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-05-08 05:47 PM


Hmmm...Well, at least you will be somewhere instead of nowhere! But, I'm sure you could find your way back if you chose to. You could follow your own trail of light!

Intriguing little write!

Love & Light,

EA

MindBodySoul
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since 2007-01-10
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3 posted 2007-05-11 09:04 AM


My Drautz~ I agree with ~EA~  the risk of loosing that light is always there... but we never loose sight of our own light... That light will guide you back...  eventhough, we may be in the dark for a bit...  But as she said... we can find it if we really want to...

Thanks for sharing...
Enjoyed it!!

Jen--->MindBodySoul

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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4 posted 2007-05-11 09:13 AM


I wouldn't worry about anything....

go with the flow

hey, you might end up stranded in a better place...

great write

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