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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-05-10 05:41 PM


Me and Suzy Kim

Suzy Kim
when I'm thinking of you,
Suzy Kim
I'm missing you.
You are
the only woman
that I miss,
the only one
I wish to kiss.
Even though
we're far apart
my love for you
is filling my heart.
Suzy Kim
as I think of you,
Suzy Kim
I'm missing you.

JamesLee
10May
2007
My sweetheart is
gone for two weeks.



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ivordavies
Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
1 posted 2007-05-10 06:07 PM


Sweet and Simple, somehow this reminded me of seperartion from the Far East and goes much further than a love song and expresses a pining in the heart...

Ivor

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-05-12 04:01 AM


Thank you ivor for the nice comment...James
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