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deval
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since 2007-05-06
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0 posted 2007-05-10 01:29 AM



How can you say I am good person?
I feel anger without showing it on face
I feel competition without entering to race
I feel frustration when it comes to chase
I feel always like little different case
How can you say, Deval is a good person

How can you say I am good person when
I feel bad on ignorance and sad on unadorance
I keep my voice down and pretend like good listener
I have cut down all my needs and all my desire
I feel the burning fire deep inside my soul
I am alone in this world without any role
How can you say, Deval is a good person

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-05-10 10:06 AM


Deval~
Welcome to PiP~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert
2 posted 2007-05-10 10:36 AM


If these are your truths, and you recognize them and can lay them out before us...then that makes you an 'honest' person in my book.

Also the way you perceive yourself is different than what others see.

I liked this - thank you for the read.

Dinah

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-05-10 10:42 AM


Greetings, Deval! I believe that those who think that they are perfect ~ aren't! lol

I would like to echo SPIRIT's reply!

Love & God's Light,

EA

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
4 posted 2007-05-10 11:01 AM


"I" is not a good person. He is superb. Any one  who knows himself/herself so well is a superb person. true and real nnd self-honor...I call it dignity.

nice poem with all the doubt.

welcome to this wonderful site.

deval
Junior Member
since 2007-05-06
Posts 16

5 posted 2007-05-10 12:33 PM


Thanks Marge,spirit,Earth Angle ,Drauntz

This is my first poem on pip so I thought it would be nice to initiate with honesty

again thanks to all to appreciate my words  


aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
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6 posted 2007-05-12 12:02 PM


Welcome -

Very strong poem that speaks volumes.
I liked it and look forward to reading
more of your words

A

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