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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-05-10 05:29 PM



To Be Considered Magnificent


Yes, I am aware
that the word
magnificent...
should be reserved
for special occasions.

Still, this word
seems to fit this
occasion perfectly,
as I rate my
sweethearts kiss...
to be considered
magnificent.


JamesLee
10May
2007
magnificent-exceptionally good.



© Copyright 2007 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Huan Yi
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1 posted 2007-05-10 07:49 PM


.


This could easily be
a poem left behind
by a homesick border guard
in Man'yôshû


John

PS With your permission, I would like to
add this to my Word File of poems by others.
What name do I give the author?

.


Enchantress
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2 posted 2007-05-10 09:02 PM


This is so lovely James.

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

aziza
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3 posted 2007-05-11 01:14 AM


James

So wonderful!

Alison

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2007-05-11 04:18 PM


JamesMichael~
You know how to rate 'em !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-05-11 05:47 PM


Thank you Huan, Enchantres, aziza and Marge for the nice comments...
Huan you have my permission...
The name is James Michael Lee...James

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