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thacuteone_09
New Member

since 2007-05-09

Posts 7

0 posted 2007-05-09 05:07 PM

If I'm afraid,
Will you be there to calm my fears?
If I'm happy,
Will you share that joy with me?
If I'm sad,
Will you be there to comfort me?
And will you be there to help me up when I fall?
Because that's what true love is about,
Always being there for one another.
If you won't do that,
Then why even bother?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-05-09 05:56 PM

Hi Kacy

welcome to Passions! I know you'll love it here

good first poem, I like it

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-05-09 06:09 PM

this is a very interesting poem. Very arrogant!
it is either a heavenly call or a celestial demand.

I do all this to my friends but none of my friend demanded me to do them and vice versa.

nice poem and welcome this wonderful site.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2007-05-09 06:22 PM

welcome to 'P.I.P.'!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2007-05-09 10:57 PM

Hello! My name is Kacy! I enjoyed your first post, and hope you find this a fun site.

deval
Junior Member

since 2007-05-06

Posts 16

5 posted 2007-05-10 01:51 AM

hello !
very pretty feelings
and yes, you have right to say that..

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2007-05-10 08:25 AM

Hello Kaci~
Welcome to PiP, the kindest circle of poetic friends on the Internet~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2007-05-10 09:27 AM

...Welcome to Passions in Poetry...

Well said..

This is a wonderful site. Share your poetry with us and enjoy others' works as well.

Check your mailbox for a special greeting..

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2007-05-10 05:36 PM

Nice writing...to me love is acceptance and caring and forgiving...among others...James

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2007-05-10 06:41 PM

Kaci - I agree...that is what love should be about...acceptance is fine, but to have the sharing no matter what, is the better part of loving.

Welcome,
M

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2007-05-10 09:00 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS KACI!
Much enjoyed your entrance post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

MindBodySoul
Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 196
NJ

11 posted 2007-05-11 05:12 PM

I remember posting my first poem on this site.... and though critic could be a bit harsh yet educational... I know you will love it here... I have and consider all my fellow poets family, because this is what this community is all about..

self expression of your most inner thoughts and feelings, being shared with people who truly understand...

WELCOME!!!

Jen--->MindBodySoul

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