Open Poetry #40 |
Moments of Fun |
anam_cara76 Junior Member
since 2007-05-06
Posts 24USA |
Moments of Fun I have nothing left to offer us I gave it all and tried to trust. You don't even seem to care Discussing this you wouldn't dare. You'd rather sit and watch tv Than try to save you and me. Only nineteen she’s so young, Naïve and free she must be fun. Someday you’ll see all you’ve lost The moments of fun at such high cost. Even then I’ll caress your face, Smile at you with a warm embrace. But it will be different and you will know That I am your friend not lover or foe. I loved you too deeply you’ll then see Sometimes things aren’t meant to be. Forever lost our dreams of bliss All because you chose to have that kiss. By that time I’ll have someone new Who I can count on, whose love is true. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You know, I am exceptionally proud of you. And I love your writing. And it's so cool that writing is what made us friends and here we are now. It's like that full circle kind of thing. Always your friend me |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nysa~ Welcome to PiP~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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anam_cara76 Junior Member
since 2007-05-06
Posts 24USA |
aziza, you know i love you and always hold our friendship dear to my heart. Thank you so much for reading! Nysa |
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anam_cara76 Junior Member
since 2007-05-06
Posts 24USA |
Thank you Marge! It's nice to find somewhere like this always, Nysa |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
welcome to PiP, Nysa I'm glad zi drug ya on over here *grins* (and I like the name, I think you were right not to take zi's name suggestion lol) |
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anam_cara76 Junior Member
since 2007-05-06
Posts 24USA |
Thanks much chaos! I really like it here... (and yeah, a's name request is more than my slow thinker can travel just now. i need to follow the kiss rule) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 1st 'write'! From 'chaos' was born all the grand 'order' (fascinating structure and 'complexity') that has evolved in this infinetly nested and wonderously 'interconnected' web of scintillating potentialities that is our Universe! [including, of course, members of the genus/species homo sapien (perhaps the most complex of 'possibilities' in the cosmos...and, often (in simultaneity) the most inherently 'chaotic' as well!)] a very warm welcome to 'P.I.P.'! ---Bruce [Universalist and 'Complexity' Scientist; Natural Philosoper/ environmentalist (and poet?!)] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Welcome to Pip! I can sure relate to the feelings here. More than you know. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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