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oceanvu2
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since 2007-02-24
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Santa Monica, California, USA

0 posted 2007-05-09 07:59 PM


Leavening Agents


Looking in my cupboard for a leavening agent,
I find yeast and baking powder.  One for white
Bread, one for corn bread.  Neither one will
Lift you up.  How do I address your bed bound
State?  What moves you, my sweet Lump beneath
The covers?  It isn’t conversation; we’re talked out.

It’s not the music that I make. I’ve lost my voice.
It’s not my love.  I can’t be funny any more, and
We’ve lost laughter.  Blossom Dearie, Jimmy Scott,
The taste for things we share, no longer have a
Sharpness on our tongues.  What lifts you up?
What makes you fly?  God’s witness, I fail through I try.

[This message has been edited by oceanvu2 (05-09-2007 08:33 PM).]

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-09 08:33 PM


funny and good. free spirit.

enjoyed with laugh.

oceanvu2
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since 2007-02-24
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Santa Monica, California, USA
2 posted 2007-05-09 09:29 PM


Hi Drauntz!  Well, gee, I thought this was one of my serious poems.  So much for what I think!  

Very best, Jim


Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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3 posted 2007-05-09 09:46 PM


"Looking in my cupboard for a leavening agent,
I find yeast and baking powder.  One for white
Bread, one for corn bread.  Neither one will
Lift you up." Even drunk woman does not think like this!!!

good laugh on you smart expression.


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