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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Someone else not you or I Today is rising up as white smoke To drift over Summer’s mountain The wind fans my face Makes black petals of your hair Already I feel the cicadas' call From deep in the valley a monkey’s howl If only for a moment before we go Hold my hand . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wonderfully word-brushed scene, John |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thanks K Some times I go Oriental Thanks again John |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"Makes black petals of your hair" how beautiuflly you choose the words that make me think that you are soooooooooo very old to see the scene by your own eyes. beautiful as always. May you have a very good night, Sir Yi Huan. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most fine 'write'! GRAND applause!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"Hold my hand" nicenicenice |
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