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Savvy
Junior Member

since 2007-04-18

Posts 19
Washington State, USA

0 posted 2007-05-09 02:05 PM

No words,
No breath.
No beat,
No wonder.

There is nothing left,
in this world that can.
Take this broken heart
   and set it free.

There is nothing left,
in this heart to say.
Take this broken soul
   and walk away.

No tempting,
No reconciliation.
No pain,
No forgivness.

There is nothing left,
in this that tha can,
take this from me
   and let me be.

This was once a warm and loving heart,
you took that away from me.
Turned it cold and then to stone.
Then you walked away.

I don't know what to say.
I have these tears on the brims of my eyes.
I'm holding back with hope, but its gone.

I loved from the begining until the end.
It was pure, and true.
You took me to the edge of the earth,
hung me over the edge and let me fall off of it.
You said you love me?
Whats up with that.

Just walk away don't turn back,
I don't care anymore.
I don't want to see your face again.
I don't even want to think of you,
the good times are nothing to me. The memories are gone from me.

I don't care anymore.
Just walk away. I have nothing left to say.
Nothing Left. For you.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2007-05-09 02:16 PM

Welcome to Passions! I can so relate to the feelings you express here. This brings back so many memories.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-05-09 07:21 PM

Hey Kellie

yeah, I can sure relate to this one

good to see you writing

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

3 posted 2007-05-10 12:58 PM

Ouch.

This was so painful to read, very gripping all at the same time though.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2007-05-10 02:00 PM

so sad
but written very well

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2007-05-10 02:51 PM

"You took me to the edge of the earth,
hung me over the edge and let me fall off of it."

~ That is why I always carry a parachute on my back, when it comes to affairs of the heart.
~ Just in case I want to bale out!

Very expressive writing, Kellie.

EA

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-05-10 04:13 PM

this is indeed very sad cry. What left for a broken heart? I shall talk to the broken heart... keep whatever love you received and keep bumping...till the blood is warm again.

enjoyed

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