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Fingers Crossed, Promises Made
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Fingers Crossed, Promises Made |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
No crying over me He said No tears are to be spilled over me He made me promise It’s a promise I can not keep Tears are healing Tears are kisses of love Tears are the rain that make memories grow when the heart feels lost Promise me He said No tears are to be spilled over me I crossed my fingers and promised Alison |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Just wonderful Alison, very very much enjoyed. Each time I read, it is better Have a great day and take care. Rick |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
of course, the last part of this brought a smile.... very lovely touch enjoyed |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
this love is soooo twisted, so twisted. it is like a piece of melted cheese in between two slices of frozen bread. enjoyed |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most fine 'write'! I particularly liked: "Tears are the rain that make memories grow when the heart feels lost" much applause!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
but of course Alison it's those two last lines that bring that amazing feeling such a beauty |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
That would be like trying to stop the rain...James |
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deval Junior Member
since 2007-05-06
Posts 16 |
In life sometimes it's not possible to suppress feelings He said No tears are to be spilled over me I crossed my fingers and promised It's like binding roaring sea into small eyes |
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