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Morning lake
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Morning lake |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
The sea lays in quiet azure, The boat is in silent cruising The air is still The hill beams verdant green The birds steal my kisses And the scent of rainbow Caresses me thoroughly on my skin When you pass by, Pray, not to drop a pebble in. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lovely images A |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
vivid imagery lays out a very beautiful scene very nice write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now this is gorgeous! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
The vision and feel of this poem is filled with so much serenity that I just closed my eyes and let myself feel it...BRAVO!!...well done...*Big Hugs* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Can just imagine! Enjoyed this. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh how I felt this...simply lovely |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
such peace and beauty let not a pebble disturb... |
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