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howardtsu
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0 posted 2007-05-08 12:36 PM



she told me i had too many pianos playing in her water

but my tunes could've caught her off gaurd

            if i had've played my cards right

                                that night

                                in Boston



                                                                   love,

                                                                   howard


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Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-05-08 12:59 PM


beautiful love poem.


enjoyed

howardtsu
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2 posted 2007-05-09 12:14 PM


thanks drauntz  
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