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Open Poetry #40
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Jenna
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since 2007-03-20
Posts 180
0 posted 2007-05-09 10:10 AM



Your eyes

pools of great depth
and emotion.

fixated.

Your smile

which speaks a thousand words
lighting my soul

fixated.

Your body..

moving closer to mine
pulling me in.

fixated.

Your heart

breating next to mine.

united.

whole.

fixated

on you...
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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
1 posted 2007-05-09 10:14 AM

marvelous
pull the reader in and keeping them fixated poem...


Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-05-09 10:50 AM

quite interesting It is a love poem but I felt a chill.
enjoyed all your mood "swing".
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