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Margherita
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0 posted 2007-05-06 02:17 PM



    
La danse by Henri Matisse


* * *


Suspended moment

before the leap into bliss

ripples fade to peace


* * *


© Copyright 2007 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2007-05-06 02:29 PM


Excellent!

I loved this!

much applause!!

The_Nameless_One
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2 posted 2007-05-06 02:56 PM


very nice I liked it

aziza
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3 posted 2007-05-06 07:46 PM


Perfectly beautiful
& magical.

Alison

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4 posted 2007-05-06 08:48 PM


Margherita, my dear lady, your words is as wonderful as the picture. beautiful!! indeed.
I Love to read your long one and short ones. all good.

enjoyed, and enjoyed again.

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2007-05-06 11:37 PM


You heal the heart with your gifted eyes.

Enjoyed.

anam_cara76
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6 posted 2007-05-07 12:02 PM


Simple yet elegant.  Very nice!
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7 posted 2007-05-07 09:23 AM


Margherita~

You pen such a lovely Senryu to greet my eyes this day~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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8 posted 2007-05-07 09:44 AM


Oh my how lovely this is!!!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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9 posted 2007-05-07 12:04 PM


Margherita
Two of my favorites.

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10 posted 2007-05-08 01:18 AM


  Love it, Margherita!   ....jo
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11 posted 2007-05-08 09:37 AM


ohhhh my
(sighs)

beautifully articulated....

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12 posted 2007-05-08 11:35 PM




oh!

Margherita!


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13 posted 2007-05-09 09:22 AM


M'dear, Margherita! Your poetry would be a glorious accompaniment to all the works of the grand masters!

Your artistic eye works well with your poetic heart.



Angelo Terrestre

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14 posted 2007-05-09 02:46 PM


I truly like this. You do these so well.
Margherita
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15 posted 2007-05-10 07:41 AM


Thank you all from my heart for your appreciation and your kind comments.
I'm sorry, I am a little bit busy these days, it will be better next week hopefully.

Wishing all of you a wonderful creative mood.

Love and Joy.
Margherita

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16 posted 2007-05-11 04:12 PM




(smiles) Oh Margerita, this is one of my favorites from you yet, as I felt such whimsical whimsy in the brevity of this making me feel relaxed, yet otherworldly, all at the same time, yay! This is wonderfully animative, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

Margherita
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17 posted 2007-05-13 04:10 PM


Thank you dear Noah!
Love and hugs.
Margherita

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18 posted 2007-07-03 02:48 PM


you make a spirit rise and a soul shine~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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