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'New Love' Shores
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'New Love' Shores |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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‘New Love’ shores As the evening sings its sunset songs to tattered hearts and scattered hills of velvet-forest green (bathed in crimson chords of liquid-fire light, on this hypnotizing night), I shall sail beyond all sorrows on these dream-tossed, ‘timescape’ seas... for new uncharted shores, where wounded souls may rest once more, in the kind, soft sands of Love! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Once again you succeeded in conveying a profound emotion with these romantic and poetically masterful expressions. Bravo! Love, Margherita |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Your two recent posts, this one and the previous one, remind me that Shopenhauer tells us, "Talent hits a target no one else can hit, genius hits a target no one else can see." |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
What a jewel. A beauty to mummer out in the evening on the patio to the bright western sky. May I suggest Move the “tattered hearts” to I shall sail “my tattered hearts”…. Because the first half you want to talk about the beauty, the spirit, the power and strength which inspired your later activity. My thought. Very romantic, truly. |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Secondhanddreampoet, This is a well-put together poem. I like your new word ‘timescape’. That is an interesting and profound thought. Bobby |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
poet I think it's your poems that keep me thinking love can work... "where wounded souls may rest once more, in the kind, soft sands of Love!" |
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